The Highwayman - Guided Writing from Y5

Stalking the pitch black moor was a dark, shadowy figure. With a triangular French cocked hat and his blood-red jacket, he looked like a responsible, decent gentleman.  His attractive exterior disguised his sly, murderous personality.  Over the bumpy, rocky cobbles he rode towards the edge of the lonely, purple moor.  Hanging around his brass buckled belt was a violent pistol and a deadly rapier.  He roamed the silent moor like a pirate roaming the raging seas.  As he dismounted his horse, the Highwayman appeared.


By Joe

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Stalking the pitch black moor was a dark, shadowy figure.  With a triangular French cocked hat and his blood-red jacket, he looked like a respectable gentleman.  His attractive exterior disguised his lawless, powerful personality.  His polished black boots glowed like stars in the empty sky.  The sly, fierce figure galloped across the purple, blank moor.  Hanging out of his murderous pocket was a metal killing pistol. As he dismounted his horse, a Highwayman was revealed.


By Nathan


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Stalking the pitch black moor was a dark, shadowy figure.  With a triangular French cocked hat and his rose-red blood coat, he looked like a well dressed gentleman.  But behind his attractive exterior was hidden his lawless personality.  He roamed the silent moor like pirate roaming the raging sea.  As he dismounted his horse, the Highwayman appeared.


By Jack


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Stalking the murky moor was a dark, shadowy figure.  With a triangular cocked hat and a pair of polished, black boots, he looked like a respectable gentleman.  His attractive exterior disguised his treacherous, murderous personality.  Roaming in the moonlight, his patterned silver sword twinkled like the brightest star.  Dismounting off his horse, the Highwayman was revealed.


By Luke