The children in Y4 have been studying a traditional Indian folk tale called 'The Ruby Prince' as part of their cross-curricular work. This week, the children have been adding detail to a moment in time. The challenge was to show the reader, through actions and speech, how the character was feeling and what he was doing.
This is Daniel's fantastic introduction... enjoy!
Great writing Daniel! I like how you have varied the way you start your sentences!
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