Thursday, 22 March 2012

Y4 Writing based on 'The Ruby Prince'


The children in Y4 have been studying a traditional Indian folk tale called 'The Ruby Prince' as part of their cross-curricular work.  This week, the children have been adding detail to a moment in time.  The challenge was to show the reader, through actions and speech, how the character was feeling and what he was doing.

This is Daniel's fantastic introduction... enjoy!

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Daniel! I like how you have varied the way you start your sentences!

    Miss Alderson

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